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Your recording is ready for you.

Check your inbox for an email with your access details. Systeme.io will send you a link to set your password and access the course.

Once you’re inside, set aside about 90 minutes, open something you can write in, and press play.

Have two things nearby:

• A poem you’re working on, even a rough one.
• About 90 minutes without interruption.

I’ll walk you through the changes myself, line by line, so you can hear the difference as I make it.

By the end, you’ll have heard what a line break can do, tried it on a poem of your own, and have four questions to bring back to it the next time you’re deciding where a line should end.

Then you’ll have a way to work through it again.