REVISE YOUR POEM

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Your revision workshop is ready for you.

Check your inbox for an email with your access details. Systeme.io will send you a link to set your password and access the workshop.

The session runs 87 minutes. Set that time aside, uninterrupted, before you start.

This isn't about starting something new. Bring a poem you've already written, and you'll watch me revise one of mine, live, using the same framework you'll then use on yours.

BEFORE YOU BEGIN

Have three things nearby:

  • A poem you've already written -- printed, or open in a document you can mark up.
  • The revision framework.
  • 87 minutes without interruption.

I'll revise a real poem of mine in front of you -- what I'm cutting, what I'm keeping, and why.

Then you'll do the same thing to your own poem, using the same framework.

After this, you'll have a process for revision you can use on everything you write from here on.